Monday, October 31, 2011

Its not the one im turning in but i just want to know if im on the right path or not!!!!!

3 comments:

  1. Thats actually looking pretty good to me. MAYBE see about cutting a little closer at the top near the shoulders and the inside of the jacket. Was the blur motion blur you added yourself? Its working quite well

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  2. yup I agree abut the edges...the model looks stiff like it's planking lol. try a more realistic pose

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  3. This is a good start. You are thinking the right way. Now, consider cleaning up around the edges of your flying figure. Also, the flying figure would be casting a shadow onto the ground the same way that the seated figure is. In fact, looking at it now, I think the shadow would cut across the tree, too. Give that a try. Sorry for only just now responding. My sister-in-law's wedding took up far more of my time than I ever expected.

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